B1KMusic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Irony Man]

There's no irony, yet this is titled "Irony Man"

How ironic

[WST 2014 Judgement]

I enjoyed it.

The voice acting was very good, but it (as well as the writing and pacing) could still use some improvement. If you just polished your work a little more, you could start getting recognized. You might even get placed in the daily top 5. Just keep working at it!

4/5

kitsunewhitetails responds:

Thanks! :3

[You Don't Consume Flourid]

What the hell is this?

For starters, the audio could use work. A LOT of work. Please look up some tutorials on voice acting and decent quality sound recording, then work on it. Practice, practice, practice. A very important aspect, specifically, is learn how to convey emotion. Please do that, because you sound very bored in the recording. The voice acting is very wooden, rivaling that of Birdemic.

And while your animation is passable, I would not encourage the use of motion tweens for EVERY GOD DAMNED BODY PART. It looks ridiculous! The animation is also pretty choppy. I don't mean laggy; I mean choppy. Very crude. Learn to use tweens sparingly, and focus more on frame-by-frame animation. Arms swinging stiffly around a pivot point does not look natural at all. Whatever you're using (I'm assuming Flash), it should have an onion skin tool. This tool lets you see the frames around the current one, so you can set them up precisely. Use it.

Another gripe I have is that this is completely random with seemingly no context. Why is Ash, a Pokemon trainer from the Pokemon franchise, walking up to Doraemon, a robotic cat from the Doraemon franchise? You're just randomly putting these characters together without cause? Maybe you should be coming up with your own characters, rather than just shoe-horning two characters together and voice-acting them poorly. Sure, random is good. But there's a certain point on the 'random' axis where 'funny' takes a nosedive. You're far beyond that point.

Work on those things, and the quality of your work should begin to see improvement. Hell, you could eventually achieve a daily top 5 spot if you take it seriously.

That said, I feel this animation deserves a 2/5.

[Man Spaghetti]

Brilliant.

MasterAardvark, I think you and Comick should team up. I'd love to see what you guys could come up with.

[BIZARRE ADVENTURE TIME]

Adventure Time: The Anime

[Sonic Rush in 7 minutes]

This is great! Even for being crudely animated XD

4/5 You earned my vote

[PewDiePie Commenters]

Mothafuckin truth!

I've watched 5 videos from the guy and they don't get better; in fact, they're boring as fuck.

[Merry Chrissmiss]

I just say Merry Christmas. If you don't like it, suck it.

5/5 Great satire on holiday drama

[Epic Minequest 2]

Yes!

5/5

[Avatar: The Other Ending]

Your animation style reminds me of eddsworld

I like eddsworld

4.5/5