B1KMusic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Old Harmonium]

It's nice to see you submitting content again.

I like that you went out of your comfort zone and explored new horizons.

Very creative!

4.5/5

aap responds:

It's nice to see someone remembers me, haha. Thanks for the review!

[WST 2014 Judgement]

I enjoyed it.

The voice acting was very good, but it (as well as the writing and pacing) could still use some improvement. If you just polished your work a little more, you could start getting recognized. You might even get placed in the daily top 5. Just keep working at it!

4/5

kitsunewhitetails responds:

Thanks! :3

[Also Too Scared To Poop]

I like how this is rated T (so I assume it's SFW), yet you showed the guy's asshole (NSFW).

Alright, I'm gonna be brutally honest now. Serious review time.

Pros:

Animation's good; very detailed art. Just what I'd expect from one of the "big shots"

The voice acting is spot on. I was convinced that I was listening to a man cowering in fear on a shitter.

Cons:

I easily recognized the Spriggin' sound from King's quest. How about some originality? Using the spriggin sound is like using the wilhelm scream.

The premise is cheesy, the situation is unrealistic (or at least the character's a pussy), and it didn't really "pull me in". I felt kinda like I was watching a demented kid's show.

There's not much story; it's just a random guy taking a shit in an outhouse in the middle of nowhere.

Little character development; he never says anything. Just gasps and sighs.

To be accurate at all, this should be rated 'M' because of the asshole (raise the nudity level to excessive if you must), then I'd've at least seen it coming and not watch this shit in my living room, lol.

Maybe I didn't get it, but I sure wasn't fond of it.

2.5/5

I'm surprised to give a score like this to someone like you. I'm disappointed.

Come on, Red.

redminus responds:

Well yeah, but that's sort of the whole thing with the Movie Jams, it's not about creating your best work ever, it's about working with your team to get things over the finish line as best as you can within the very short time frame. Obviously many of the Flashes that get finished might not stand on their own as well outside of the context of the Movie Jam, but they're not necessarily supposed to :/

And I'll be spinning in my grave the day that showing a cartoon butthole is considered "Mature".

[stupad stick]

Very...goofy.

I watched it twice, so you're doing something right.

Given that this isn't a really serious submission, I don't think a critique is necessary.

It's entertaining

3/5

MVPTOAST responds:

i like comments but i hate thoose serious ones so l like what u did there :)

[Rubert da Koopa]

Good as usual, rice.

But I have one question. Why is this so laggy after Mario jumps on him?

I don't understand why it does it every time, but it brings my browser to an almost crashed state. Maybe you should look into that :/

4/5

RicePirate responds:

I think it's the vcam.... I'll what I can do!

[Donkey Kong CoE-Ep.1]

When you need a tutorial on how to watch a movie, you're doing something wrong.

Either time the dialog or voice act it.

2/5

DiamondPearlBrothers responds:

Sorry if it is too complicated. We did it that way because we wanted the music fitting to the scenes,
especially at the exciting points and during the fights.
Thank you for your critique, we will try to do better next time.