Meh
I give kudos for the effort, but I'm not a fan of midi and midi presets. I think it sounds too dry and bland, there needs to be some love put into it; a more dynamic drum beat, better voices, better EQ. Overall, I have to give this a 6, it was a good effort, but right now, it sounds like a garage band :(
Suggestions:
Try searching the net for some better drum sounds, add some bass, take away the repetitive clash sound, Try learning how to use Sytrus--people say it's a crappy synthesizer, but when you learn how to use it and make your own voices, you can literally blow people away. Use the mixer, add effects, add EQ, use filters, use what ever is necessary to make your song as beautiful as possible.
One more thing, always avoid midi, using a midi file has random, off beat, often horrible sounding consequences. You also don't get much creative freedom if you're not there making the riff.
6/10
better luck next time :D